After our group critique, the feedback lisa and I got was:
we needed to focus more on the typographic side of things rather that the subject. We need to focus on and look into how the type can reflect our research.
We was also told that colour was needed in our piece to exaggerate the airbrushed side of the argument.
We still like the idea of tracing paper, showing the natural layer under the exaggerated airbrushed layer. However, this time we are only going to use two layers to represent the two sides of the argument.